Comments on: Varda remembers shadow doves http://www.mhalwae.com/2010/03/31/varda-remembers-shadow-doves/ "They had to flee to Mhalwae..." Fri, 11 Nov 2011 04:25:47 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.1.3 By: Lothere http://www.mhalwae.com/2010/03/31/varda-remembers-shadow-doves/#comment-54589 Lothere Sat, 03 Apr 2010 16:21:00 +0000 http://www.mhalwae.com/?p=4176#comment-54589 First, I too was absurdly happy when I opened my RSS reader for the first time in a week and saw a Mhalwae chapter. :bunny: Such an odd girl! She seems to have such weird hang-ups -- the fascination with Varda's belly, the fear of anyone touching her hair. And odd that she latched onto the not-very-maternal Varda. I can't wait to learn more about her. The blood is a bad sign, and quick stabbing pain like that doesn't seem quite right for labor. At least the baby is still moving. How far along is she? Oh I hope she can find Hepsie. But somehow I wonder if she know a little something about babies herself. And I really didn't find this chapter below-par, Verity. I won't argue with you if you don't feel it's up to your own standards, but maybe you're just feeling rusty. :-) I certainly won't discourage you from writing more often!! Have fun in Turkey! First, I too was absurdly happy when I opened my RSS reader for the first time in a week and saw a Mhalwae chapter. :bunny:

Such an odd girl! She seems to have such weird hang-ups — the fascination with Varda’s belly, the fear of anyone touching her hair. And odd that she latched onto the not-very-maternal Varda. I can’t wait to learn more about her.

The blood is a bad sign, and quick stabbing pain like that doesn’t seem quite right for labor. At least the baby is still moving. How far along is she?

Oh I hope she can find Hepsie. But somehow I wonder if she know a little something about babies herself.

And I really didn’t find this chapter below-par, Verity. I won’t argue with you if you don’t feel it’s up to your own standards, but maybe you’re just feeling rusty. :-) I certainly won’t discourage you from writing more often!!

Have fun in Turkey!

]]> By: Van http://www.mhalwae.com/2010/03/31/varda-remembers-shadow-doves/#comment-54585 Van Wed, 31 Mar 2010 21:54:26 +0000 http://www.mhalwae.com/?p=4176#comment-54585 SQUEEE! I just went to my site to reply to a comment and OH MY GOD, MHALWAE'S AT THE TOP OF THE BLOG ROLL!! :D :D :D I seriously got up and did the bunny dance. I wish I was joking. I didn't think there was anything wrong with this post at all. I thought it was very well done. Your descriptions were wonderful, especially with the start of the labor. Speaking of which... the baby! Yaaaaay! :D Mara is an interesting little girl. I'm still curious as to what happened to her, since you said it wasn't rape (or at least, not in the physical sense). I wonder what the thing about having her hair touched is all about. Oh well, all will be revealed in due time, I suppose :) Have fun in Turkey! :D SQUEEE! I just went to my site to reply to a comment and OH MY GOD, MHALWAE’S AT THE TOP OF THE BLOG ROLL!! :D :D :D I seriously got up and did the bunny dance. I wish I was joking.

I didn’t think there was anything wrong with this post at all. I thought it was very well done. Your descriptions were wonderful, especially with the start of the labor.

Speaking of which… the baby! Yaaaaay! :D

Mara is an interesting little girl. I’m still curious as to what happened to her, since you said it wasn’t rape (or at least, not in the physical sense). I wonder what the thing about having her hair touched is all about. Oh well, all will be revealed in due time, I suppose :)

Have fun in Turkey! :D

]]> By: Verity http://www.mhalwae.com/2010/03/31/varda-remembers-shadow-doves/#comment-54584 Verity Wed, 31 Mar 2010 21:24:21 +0000 http://www.mhalwae.com/?p=4176#comment-54584 Btw. I am not super happy with this post. I am always a bit sad by how much my writing goes downhill if I am not practising. More incentive to write more often. Btw. I am not super happy with this post. I am always a bit sad by how much my writing goes downhill if I am not practising. More incentive to write more often.

]]> By: Verity http://www.mhalwae.com/2010/03/31/varda-remembers-shadow-doves/#comment-54583 Verity Wed, 31 Mar 2010 21:23:39 +0000 http://www.mhalwae.com/?p=4176#comment-54583 I finally wrote a post! Hurray! Feeling more inspired to write now. Unfortunately (well not really because I am so looking forward to it!) I am going to be away for the next 18 days on holiday in Turkey with my family. So I am going to leave you guys hanging a bit. But I really do feel like I am getting back my writing mojo so hopefully when I get back there will be more posts coming :) I finally wrote a post! Hurray! Feeling more inspired to write now. Unfortunately (well not really because I am so looking forward to it!) I am going to be away for the next 18 days on holiday in Turkey with my family. So I am going to leave you guys hanging a bit. But I really do feel like I am getting back my writing mojo so hopefully when I get back there will be more posts coming :)

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