Valeriya is really quite out of it. I would totally be freaking out if I saw Madlenka looking like that. Talk about scary! I like Cindra in wavy vision though. She looks so funny.

Hi Sofie! *holds up welcome to Mhalwae banner*. And thank you. I’m glad you like the story so far. Sorry if I am creeping you out too much. I should have thought to warn you about the horror part but I guess I don’t feel like it is that scary because I wrote it (so it is in my head somewhere already) but I forget that other people do. Also it gets bit less scary when all of the creepy characters are wandering around the neighbourhood having pillow fights with each other . I think the most fun thing to write is the relationship between the characters. I have more trouble when it comes to fitting the bigger storyline together. And sorry for distracting you from you work but it does make me feel good that you like the story enough to be distracted And it so cool that you actually read my story! You are the first person I actually know in real life who has read the whole thing. You should get a medal or something for that And thanks again for dinner on Sunday. It was really lovely. We should organise one for here soon.

This was an awesome chapter, Verity. You even made me feel sorry for Valeriya again, even though I was hating everything that was ruining poor Radomir’s chance at redemption. I still think she is pretty creepy, in the same way Mella was at the beginning, but I guess she can’t help any of that.

Interesting that she knows it wasn’t Radomir but doesn’t know who it is. It means she can’t remember sleeping with anyone. I guess it is either Harndall, or in some way Cebrien found a way to impregnate her himself, which I don’t want to think about much. She was spending a lot of time unconscious in the days following her attack, but I think it must have been one of those two. (Even though the Father is just as innocent as she probably.)

I don’t like the way she said “a father of it” though, that is just weird. Maybe her syntax is just garbled but … don’t want to think about that much, either.

Very cool effects with the pictures, too!

Now bring on the Radomir!