Comments on: Morven cannot http://www.mhalwae.com/2007/10/14/morven-cannot/ "They had to flee to Mhalwae..." Fri, 11 Nov 2011 04:25:47 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.1.3 By: Verity http://www.mhalwae.com/2007/10/14/morven-cannot/#comment-975 Verity Sun, 27 Jan 2008 15:27:08 +0000 http://www.mhalwae.com/2007/10/14/morven-cannot/#comment-975 That's very shrewd of you Lisa *those shifty Lotherian eyes*. That’s very shrewd of you Lisa *those shifty Lotherian eyes*.

]]> By: Lisa http://www.mhalwae.com/2007/10/14/morven-cannot/#comment-974 Lisa Thu, 27 Dec 2007 18:11:03 +0000 http://www.mhalwae.com/2007/10/14/morven-cannot/#comment-974 I think Morven has some sort of heart condition. I'm surprised that no one else has voiced that same thought. I think Morven has some sort of heart condition. I’m surprised that no one else has voiced that same thought.

]]> By: Verity http://www.mhalwae.com/2007/10/14/morven-cannot/#comment-972 Verity Sun, 21 Oct 2007 19:40:13 +0000 http://www.mhalwae.com/2007/10/14/morven-cannot/#comment-972 I love Alexis' cheesy moustache! You can just picture him carefully shaping it every morning in the mirror. And it really is such a puny little thing. There is technically no France since it is a made-up world, although I am using the languages from the real-world since I am really bad at making up stuff like that. So there is a country in the world that is sort-of based on France and they speak French there but Alexis is not from there. He does come from Branwhuld the country they had to abandon as do most of the characters. Some of their parents are from different countries but as far as I have thought it out now (and I might change it slightly) the only characters who definitely come from elsewhere are Madlenka and Nyawe (a new character in the next post!), who are both from Lomorrad a neighbouring country. I'm off to check out your new post! I love Alexis’ cheesy moustache! You can just picture him carefully shaping it every morning in the mirror. And it really is such a puny little thing.

There is technically no France since it is a made-up world, although I am using the languages from the real-world since I am really bad at making up stuff like that. So there is a country in the world that is sort-of based on France and they speak French there but Alexis is not from there. He does come from Branwhuld the country they had to abandon as do most of the characters. Some of their parents are from different countries but as far as I have thought it out now (and I might change it slightly) the only characters who definitely come from elsewhere are Madlenka and Nyawe (a new character in the next post!), who are both from Lomorrad a neighbouring country.

I’m off to check out your new post!

]]> By: Mandie http://www.mhalwae.com/2007/10/14/morven-cannot/#comment-971 Mandie Sun, 21 Oct 2007 15:49:13 +0000 http://www.mhalwae.com/2007/10/14/morven-cannot/#comment-971 Poor, poor Morven. She sure has been through the ringer. Great update, I can't wait till the next one! Poor, poor Morven. She sure has been through the ringer. Great update, I can’t wait till the next one!

]]> By: Tiana http://www.mhalwae.com/2007/10/14/morven-cannot/#comment-973 Tiana Fri, 19 Oct 2007 17:01:13 +0000 http://www.mhalwae.com/2007/10/14/morven-cannot/#comment-973 Well you can hardly blame the poor girl for not wanting it anymore. Got her in quite the predicament last time and she almost died. But I bet she is feeling miserable for not doing it with her husband and knowing he'll just go somewhere else. You portrayed his personality with his looks perfectly Verity. With the cheesy mustache and the long hair. He's not French is he? Bleh. I didn't like him from the moment I saw him cause of his appearance! That's bad I know but he just reeked cheesy womanizer. I guess that was your plan though. Oh and btw I don't know if your subscribed but I put another post up on Soaghal, finally! Well you can hardly blame the poor girl for not wanting it anymore. Got her in quite the predicament last time and she almost died. But I bet she is feeling miserable for not doing it with her husband and knowing he’ll just go somewhere else. You portrayed his personality with his looks perfectly Verity. With the cheesy mustache and the long hair. He’s not French is he? Bleh. I didn’t like him from the moment I saw him cause of his appearance! That’s bad I know but he just reeked cheesy womanizer. I guess that was your plan though.

Oh and btw I don’t know if your subscribed but I put another post up on Soaghal, finally!

]]> By: Verity http://www.mhalwae.com/2007/10/14/morven-cannot/#comment-970 Verity Tue, 16 Oct 2007 22:13:31 +0000 http://www.mhalwae.com/2007/10/14/morven-cannot/#comment-970 Alexis isn't the most observant guy as you've all noticed. He's not totally unfeeling but he just isn't that in tune with other people's feelings. And Morven knows him well and is clever enough to know exactly how to distract him from pestering her. The thing is, right now she could really do with some pestering but Alexis is too silly to push the issue. He would try and take care of her if he knew but his thoughts are generally mostly focused on himself so it is hard for him to realise when other people need him. It isn't just fatigue from the twins but I'm not going to say more at this point. And there will be a follow up chapter about Alexis in a couple of posts but prepare to be disappointed... he isn't doing much of that old church-praying. I felt horrible for Morven in this chapter. That really is the worst feeling in the world. It is one thing to want to but be unable to for various reasons, but losing the want to full stop is so much worse. Alexis isn’t the most observant guy as you’ve all noticed. He’s not totally unfeeling but he just isn’t that in tune with other people’s feelings. And Morven knows him well and is clever enough to know exactly how to distract him from pestering her. The thing is, right now she could really do with some pestering but Alexis is too silly to push the issue. He would try and take care of her if he knew but his thoughts are generally mostly focused on himself so it is hard for him to realise when other people need him.

It isn’t just fatigue from the twins but I’m not going to say more at this point. And there will be a follow up chapter about Alexis in a couple of posts but prepare to be disappointed… he isn’t doing much of that old church-praying.

I felt horrible for Morven in this chapter. That really is the worst feeling in the world. It is one thing to want to but be unable to for various reasons, but losing the want to full stop is so much worse.

]]> By: Pandora Moon http://www.mhalwae.com/2007/10/14/morven-cannot/#comment-969 Pandora Moon Tue, 16 Oct 2007 15:26:35 +0000 http://www.mhalwae.com/2007/10/14/morven-cannot/#comment-969 Hi. As much as I am annoyed with Alex for not paying much attention to the fact that something's wrong with his wife I don't think that Morven should've just brushed his concerns away though. Surely Alex would at least try to take care of her. Keep Simming!. See ya. Hi. As much as I am annoyed with Alex for not paying much attention to the fact that something’s wrong with his wife I don’t think that Morven should’ve just brushed his concerns away though. Surely Alex would at least try to take care of her.

Keep Simming!.

See ya.

]]> By: Mao http://www.mhalwae.com/2007/10/14/morven-cannot/#comment-968 Mao Mon, 15 Oct 2007 02:35:27 +0000 http://www.mhalwae.com/2007/10/14/morven-cannot/#comment-968 Oh, wow. I loved this part... loved. I especially loved how well you depicted the scene between the two of them. Poor Morven... is she sickly or just weary from the childbirth? I hope there's nothing truly wrong with her. She's such an interesting girl... and to deal with Alexis! She has to be quite strong willed, too. Alexis' flippant attitude is perfectly played out here. Really fantastic all the way around. It left me feeling very sad for the both of them, but especially Morven. The realization at the end was the crux of it all. Oh, wow. I loved this part… loved. I especially loved how well you depicted the scene between the two of them. Poor Morven… is she sickly or just weary from the childbirth? I hope there’s nothing truly wrong with her. She’s such an interesting girl… and to deal with Alexis! She has to be quite strong willed, too.

Alexis’ flippant attitude is perfectly played out here. Really fantastic all the way around. It left me feeling very sad for the both of them, but especially Morven. The realization at the end was the crux of it all.

]]> By: Lothere http://www.mhalwae.com/2007/10/14/morven-cannot/#comment-967 Lothere Sun, 14 Oct 2007 20:08:00 +0000 http://www.mhalwae.com/2007/10/14/morven-cannot/#comment-967 Ugh, that left me feeling a little sick myself. Alexis's insouciance is part of his charm, but we really see it at its most heartless extremes here. Poor Morven is practically dying in his arms, and although he <i>finally</i> starts to notice something is wrong, she distracts him with nothing more than a jab at his vanity. And <i>then</i> he goes strolling off (doing that finger-snapping walk I just love -- I crack up every time Paul does it)... "to see how things are going with the church." Yeah sure you are! Of course you could always do a follow-up chapter where he goes to the church and breaks down in tearful prayers for his wife's health. And if you do I will be glad I was wrong about him. But I think Morven knows him best. Except for you, of course, Verity, so feel free to prove us both wrong. ;-) So what is wrong with Morven, anyway? Those are such worrying symptoms, it seems like much more than fatigue from caring for twins. And that is one of the worst feelings in the world, when you just <i>don't want to anymore</i>. Except maybe when you are a man and <i>you just can't</i>. But something tells me Alexis doesn't have that problem, so Morven has all my pity at the moment. :mad: I think I'm going to wish it on him. Ugh, that left me feeling a little sick myself. Alexis’s insouciance is part of his charm, but we really see it at its most heartless extremes here. Poor Morven is practically dying in his arms, and although he finally starts to notice something is wrong, she distracts him with nothing more than a jab at his vanity.

And then he goes strolling off (doing that finger-snapping walk I just love — I crack up every time Paul does it)… “to see how things are going with the church.” Yeah sure you are!

Of course you could always do a follow-up chapter where he goes to the church and breaks down in tearful prayers for his wife’s health. And if you do I will be glad I was wrong about him. But I think Morven knows him best. Except for you, of course, Verity, so feel free to prove us both wrong. ;-)

So what is wrong with Morven, anyway? Those are such worrying symptoms, it seems like much more than fatigue from caring for twins. And that is one of the worst feelings in the world, when you just don’t want to anymore. Except maybe when you are a man and you just can’t. But something tells me Alexis doesn’t have that problem, so Morven has all my pity at the moment. :mad: I think I’m going to wish it on him.

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